Jump On In To Braden's Blogging

Student Blogging Challenge 2012

100 Word Challenge

on July 24, 2013

This is my 100 word challenge the words I hate to use were…

My heart was beating incredibly fast. Enjoy

 

My heart was beating incredibly fast but I’m out of energy. I got my breath back at started the chase.  I rode my bike as fast as I could to catch up. I’m tired so now my aim is to finish there was 4ks left and I knew that I could do this but something was holding me back I was about to stop riding until a herd of monkeys started chasing us. They were catching up. 2ks left, I rode my bike faster and faster. I finished, and then I look in my lunch box and see a banana.

 

Hope you like it

 


One Response to “100 Word Challenge”

  1. Mrs Gridley says:

    Wonderful writing Braden!
    I was intrigued to see if you would finish the bike ride and your ending was very funny. I was wondering whether you got the banana or the monkeys. You have a fantastic imagination. Don’t forget to edit your work.
    Thanks for putting it on your blog.
    Mrs Gridley

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Skip to toolbar